We are learning about expanding sentences with more detail.
Oscar cried.
When: 10am on Tuesday
Where: lying on the grass at school
Why: someone kicked him
At 10am on Tuesday, lying on the grass at school, Oscar cried because someone kicked him.
They had an argument.
When: at lunch
Where:on the playground
Why:because Alex stole his toy car
At lunchtime, in the playground they had an argument because Alex stole his toy car.
What do you think of my expanded sentences?
I learned that it can be easier to expand sentences and it is more interesting to expand sentences.
