We are learning about expanding sentences with more detail.
Oscar cried.
When: 10am on Tuesday
Where: lying on the grass at school
Why: someone kicked him
At 10am on Tuesday, lying on the grass at school, Oscar cried because someone kicked him.
They had an argument.
When: at lunch
Where:on the playground
Why:because Alex stole his toy car
At lunchtime, in the playground they had an argument because Alex stole his toy car.
What do you think of my expanded sentences?
I learned that it can be easier to expand sentences and it is more interesting to expand sentences.
Hey Eton,
ReplyDeleteI really like your sentence expansions. It an really help people with their sentence expansion. Maybe next time you could put more capital letters and better punctuation other than that its perfect. Here's a question who kicked Oscar and where ?
hello Kamryn.
Deleteto answer your question. George kicked Oscar in the leg